Title:
Dozing Green
Genre:
Sci-fic
Target Audience:
Working Adults
Dominant Culture/Social Issue featured in my story:
Aliens/Mythical folklore
Logline
In the planet, Klendathu, a gunslinger wanderer struggles to overcome the imp in order to save the gnome, but what he needs to do, comes with a price to pay.
Synopsis
A long, long time ago in a tattered, tattered galaxy...After leaving the sticky planet Lavalulu, a group of ogres fly toward a distant speck. The speck gradually resolves into a blonde, space abbey. Civil war strikes the galaxy, which is ruled by Ai, a fake imp capable of sloth and even cruelty. Terrified, a squat gnome known as Jeanette flees the Empire, with her protector, Jason. They head for Plymouth on the planet Klendathu. When they finally arrive, a fight breaks out. Jason uses his tattered pistol to defend Jeanette and they decide it's time to leave Klendathu and steal a truck to shoot their way out. They encounter a tribe of goblins. is attacked and the gnome is captured by the goblins and taken back to Plymouth. Jason must fight to save Gnome Jeanette but when he accidentally unearths a wild gun, the entire future of the tattered, sticky galaxy is at stake.
Character List
Jason - Protagonist
Jeanette - Secondary Character
The Imp - Antagonist
Reflection1:
why i think my story will appeal to the target audience
Firstly, this is a modern science fiction film, many working adults these days are in to Star Wars, Prometheus and many more modern science fiction film, they love
to see new fresh films in the scene, so this would make a good theme
Reflection2:
what i think makes a good screen story
Its a story with all original sci fiction term, and i try to imply asian term to it
so its a mix of western and asian culture
3 Act Structure for your story idea
Act1 - Jason is a wanderer of different planet, on his encounter to the next planet, there was a civil war, and he set his sight on saving this Gnome, Jeanette, he encountered there.
Act2 - He is stopped by the evil emperor imp, Ai.
Act3 - He manage to escape with Jeanette, and destroyed the imp, with a magical gun.
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